शुक्रवार, 15 मई 2009

yaade



Bhul gye sab maa ka ghar wo neem ka perh
wo dupahar ki bate
wo sakhiyo k kisse
wo bhabhi ki kahani
wo purane ashiq k kisse
wo pahli rat suhani
wo bahna ki sari
wo masi ki chappal purani
wo kachchi amiya
wo achar ki bani
wo purani kameez par
karhi apni hatho ki bel
paise bacha kar jorhe
patile ki kahani
bhul gye ham ab sab
jab se basayi hai duniya naveentam suhani
nhi jante bachche mere ab
kya nani ka dular
kya mama ka pyar
kya bua ki galiya
kya chacha ki maar
chut gyi hai garmi ki
chuttiyo ki bahar
tubwell ka nahana
ab swimmingclass mai
achar ab pachranga ho gya
neem ki chao ab MCDONALD
PURANA KURTA BHI KAHI KHO GYA
jab sunati hu bachcho ko
apne bachpan ki kahani
to sochti hu bad mai beth kar
kya sunayege mere bachche
apne bachcho ko kahani
kyu chut gye sab rishte
rah gyi bas yaade suhani

12 टिप्‍पणियां:

  1. jab sunati hu bachcho ko
    apne bachpan ki kahani
    to sochti hu bad mai beth kar
    kya sunayege mere bachche
    apne bachcho ko kahani
    kyu chut gye sab rishte
    rah gyi bas yaade सुहानी.......अजीब - सा सत्य है आज का

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  2. बहोत बढिया है रे...कितनी सारी भावनाए छुपी है इसमें सच....दिल को छु गई सारी बाते...

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  3. bahut khoob..
    agar aap hindi ko hindi me likhe to maza aayee..plz..

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  4. namaskar neelima ji

    main aksar aapki kavitayen padhata hoon aur bahut prabhavit hota hoon.. aap bahut sundar likhti hai

    aapki ye kavita yaaden ,wakai me hame purani yaado me le gayi hai ..
    itni acchi kavita ke liye badhai sweekar karen..

    meri nayi kavita " tera chale jaana " aapke pyaar aur aashirwad bhare comment ki raah dekh rahi hai .. aapse nivedan hai ki padhkar mera hausala badhayen..

    http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/2009/05/blog-post_18.html


    aapka

    vijay

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  5. Thanks for vising my blog and for appreciation..
    sorry i did not know that u dont know english.. i feel extremelly sorry...
    you write good .. wish u all the best...
    are mai khud ek adna sa insaan hun.. mai kya raah dikha sakta hun..

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  6. meri pairon kii thakan tum ruth na jaanaa mujh se
    ek tu hii to mera raaz-e-safar rakhati hai
    thank you all for comments

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  7. इस कविता को अपनी आवाज़ में अपने संशिप्त परिचय के साथ मेरे पास भेज दें rasprabha@gmail.com

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  8. अति भावपूर्ण है आपकी सारी रचनाये...आपने बूली-बिसरी कितनी ही यादों से गुजार दिया...

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