yaade
Bhul gye sab maa ka ghar wo neem ka perh
wo dupahar ki bate
wo sakhiyo k kisse
wo bhabhi ki kahani
wo purane ashiq k kisse
wo pahli rat suhani
wo bahna ki sari
wo masi ki chappal purani
wo kachchi amiya
wo achar ki bani
wo purani kameez par
karhi apni hatho ki bel
paise bacha kar jorhe
patile ki kahani
bhul gye ham ab sab
jab se basayi hai duniya naveentam suhani
nhi jante bachche mere ab
kya nani ka dular
kya mama ka pyar
kya bua ki galiya
kya chacha ki maar
chut gyi hai garmi ki
chuttiyo ki bahar
tubwell ka nahana
ab swimmingclass mai
achar ab pachranga ho gya
neem ki chao ab MCDONALD
PURANA KURTA BHI KAHI KHO GYA
jab sunati hu bachcho ko
apne bachpan ki kahani
to sochti hu bad mai beth kar
kya sunayege mere bachche
apne bachcho ko kahani
kyu chut gye sab rishte
rah gyi bas yaade suhani
jab sunati hu bachcho ko
जवाब देंहटाएंapne bachpan ki kahani
to sochti hu bad mai beth kar
kya sunayege mere bachche
apne bachcho ko kahani
kyu chut gye sab rishte
rah gyi bas yaade सुहानी.......अजीब - सा सत्य है आज का
बहोत बढिया है रे...कितनी सारी भावनाए छुपी है इसमें सच....दिल को छु गई सारी बाते...
जवाब देंहटाएंbahut khoob..
जवाब देंहटाएंagar aap hindi ko hindi me likhe to maza aayee..plz..
namaskar neelima ji
जवाब देंहटाएंmain aksar aapki kavitayen padhata hoon aur bahut prabhavit hota hoon.. aap bahut sundar likhti hai
aapki ye kavita yaaden ,wakai me hame purani yaado me le gayi hai ..
itni acchi kavita ke liye badhai sweekar karen..
meri nayi kavita " tera chale jaana " aapke pyaar aur aashirwad bhare comment ki raah dekh rahi hai .. aapse nivedan hai ki padhkar mera hausala badhayen..
http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/2009/05/blog-post_18.html
aapka
vijay
Thanks for vising my blog and for appreciation..
जवाब देंहटाएंsorry i did not know that u dont know english.. i feel extremelly sorry...
you write good .. wish u all the best...
are mai khud ek adna sa insaan hun.. mai kya raah dikha sakta hun..
read Hindi instaed of English.. please
जवाब देंहटाएंVery nice Di..
जवाब देंहटाएंmeri pairon kii thakan tum ruth na jaanaa mujh se
जवाब देंहटाएंek tu hii to mera raaz-e-safar rakhati hai
thank you all for comments
इस कविता को अपनी आवाज़ में अपने संशिप्त परिचय के साथ मेरे पास भेज दें rasprabha@gmail.com
जवाब देंहटाएंneelima ur really a great poet.... dr.amarjeet kaunke
जवाब देंहटाएंअति भावपूर्ण है आपकी सारी रचनाये...आपने बूली-बिसरी कितनी ही यादों से गुजार दिया...
जवाब देंहटाएंwo pyari si yaaden... wo purane din:)
जवाब देंहटाएं